I posted comments on these three blogs:
Mike's Eng 101 Contributions
USI English 201 Service and Activism
Cajacobop
Tuesday, February 17, 2009
Monday, February 16, 2009
Blog analysis
In today’s society money is the source of everyone’s problems. Some have too much money they do not know what to do with, but more often than not many families do not have enough money to pay the bills or even support their children. People are willing to do anything to save money. As I was browsing the internet I ran across a blog titled “Eat less, Save Money”, written by Bryan White that relates to adults saving money.
White is middle-aged and from Australia but is using his experiences to relate to the average adult trying to save money. He shows his credibility by letting his readers know that he did not stick to being a vegan, but that he did try it for 3 months and he just liked meat too much. White’s blogs have a consistent theme of the frugal logic and saving people money. He uses his honest opinions to help others in their journey to a better way to save money.
He can appeal to young adults and the more mature older adults. His intended audience is those of everyday life that are looking to save money and “prevent cancer and heart disease” (White). Although this blog is aimed at adults this blog is available for all to see, analyze and put towards their life. Anyone can come across this blog by searching the internet for ways to save money. Although anyone can read this blog it is not meant for children and they will take nothing away from it. The blog is meant for people wanting to try new things and save money while doing it. This blog could also be directed towards people wanting to add years to their life and prevent diseases.
In order to make his audience believe that he is being truthful about this subject matter he uses real life experiences. White explains his journey with being a vegan and how it helped him but also how he did not like it and he felt unhealthy. “I felt pretty lethargic and lacked a lot of energy, perhaps it was due to a B12 or zinc deficiency” (White). Through his experience he learned how much money he could save and posted this information to give his audience more information if they were to try to become a vegan. He uses some humor to try and keep people’s attention and keep them returning to his blogs (he has posted many on frugal topics).
If you are in need of a lifestyle change and a chance to save some money subscribe to White’s blogs. He lays out exactly how much money he saved buying vegetables and not the other junk and also the healthy aspects of veganism. He portrays veganism as a great thing to do but just not what he was looking for and not right for him. You can kill two birds with one stone by being a vegan.
Recognizing the rhetorical triangle between the writer, the reader, and the message is the key in being able to understand and analyze blogs posted by everyday people.
White is middle-aged and from Australia but is using his experiences to relate to the average adult trying to save money. He shows his credibility by letting his readers know that he did not stick to being a vegan, but that he did try it for 3 months and he just liked meat too much. White’s blogs have a consistent theme of the frugal logic and saving people money. He uses his honest opinions to help others in their journey to a better way to save money.
He can appeal to young adults and the more mature older adults. His intended audience is those of everyday life that are looking to save money and “prevent cancer and heart disease” (White). Although this blog is aimed at adults this blog is available for all to see, analyze and put towards their life. Anyone can come across this blog by searching the internet for ways to save money. Although anyone can read this blog it is not meant for children and they will take nothing away from it. The blog is meant for people wanting to try new things and save money while doing it. This blog could also be directed towards people wanting to add years to their life and prevent diseases.
In order to make his audience believe that he is being truthful about this subject matter he uses real life experiences. White explains his journey with being a vegan and how it helped him but also how he did not like it and he felt unhealthy. “I felt pretty lethargic and lacked a lot of energy, perhaps it was due to a B12 or zinc deficiency” (White). Through his experience he learned how much money he could save and posted this information to give his audience more information if they were to try to become a vegan. He uses some humor to try and keep people’s attention and keep them returning to his blogs (he has posted many on frugal topics).
If you are in need of a lifestyle change and a chance to save some money subscribe to White’s blogs. He lays out exactly how much money he saved buying vegetables and not the other junk and also the healthy aspects of veganism. He portrays veganism as a great thing to do but just not what he was looking for and not right for him. You can kill two birds with one stone by being a vegan.
Recognizing the rhetorical triangle between the writer, the reader, and the message is the key in being able to understand and analyze blogs posted by everyday people.
Concerns about the world.
So many things around us are unexplainable and many of us would like answers to these events. Some things that happen in life boggle my mind and make me wonder how these things happen, these are just a few things that i am curious about:
1. How can mold take two people's lives that i care about?
2. If we are in a recession then how can we afford to five away millions of dollars by opening the right cases?
3. Poverty is increasing all around us and nothing is being done to stop it.
4. So many of us look to our new president to change everything that is wrong in our country, is that even possible?
5. Why does the cost of going to college keep rising and making it less affordable for students to attend?
6. Why does each generation keep getting worse and worse, in every aspect?
7. Watching the news is nothing but a horror flick.
8. People are finding more and more ways to cheat and get what they want, what about the people who do the right thing...what do they get in return?
9. It really bothers me that people do not use gloves at work ( I work in a restaraunt).
I wish i had the answers to many of these questions, I hate that i do not.
1. How can mold take two people's lives that i care about?
2. If we are in a recession then how can we afford to five away millions of dollars by opening the right cases?
3. Poverty is increasing all around us and nothing is being done to stop it.
4. So many of us look to our new president to change everything that is wrong in our country, is that even possible?
5. Why does the cost of going to college keep rising and making it less affordable for students to attend?
6. Why does each generation keep getting worse and worse, in every aspect?
7. Watching the news is nothing but a horror flick.
8. People are finding more and more ways to cheat and get what they want, what about the people who do the right thing...what do they get in return?
9. It really bothers me that people do not use gloves at work ( I work in a restaraunt).
I wish i had the answers to many of these questions, I hate that i do not.
Tuesday, February 10, 2009
Public Spheres
Public Spheres are all around. They provide one with information about anything and everything and most of the time are very useful. If you take the time to look you will find them. These are some of the many that I found when walking around campus and the city.
-Sidewalk chalk
-Bulletin boards in the U.C
-the involvement fair
-the windows with the window chalk
-signs posted in the ground displaying activities
-billboards
-the televisions in the U.C
-bulletin boards in the dorms and apartments
-Sidewalk chalk
-Bulletin boards in the U.C
-the involvement fair
-the windows with the window chalk
-signs posted in the ground displaying activities
-billboards
-the televisions in the U.C
-bulletin boards in the dorms and apartments
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